Moriah Leila

I liked this poem because I could really relate to it. It is hard to determine who I am when all of my roles are removed. My only critique is ...

Good job on this piece. I too enjoyed the fact that you focused on the speaker's flaws instead of their strengths. And I liked that you regarded love as a ...

Ha ha, this was a very clever piece. I really liked that the poem was from the house's perspective. Very fresh. Although I am wondering how a house can own ...

While I thought you did a good job conveying the point you were trying to make, this poem lacked emotion. No one is going to connect to your work if ...

I have to agree with Mr. Knightley, this poem is wonderful! I love your description of the scars and the tears. Although at times I felt like you were trying ...

I have to disagree with everyone else, I think you forced the pattern and the rhyme. I think that might be the reason why it is difficult for us to ...

I get this poem, but to be brutally honest, I think it is extremely whiny. Oh poor me, no one cares about me! Instead of complaining, infuse this poem with ...

I really enjoyed this poem. It is so true! And it gave me a good laugh. My only critique is the last two lines: Because I am Tissue. Up until ...

I have to say that this is extremely well written and very moving. I think you catch the emotion behind such traumatising events very well. It is a tad long, ...

I'm not so sure about this poem, it read more like prose than actual poetry. Perhaps because it didn't flow quite like I expect poetry to. Also I wonder where ...

This poem has good bone structure, but it needs some more meat on those bones. Nighttime is so much more than just what you can see and smell. I wish ...

It is decent, but I wish you had put more emotion into this poem. Quarrelling with a friend is never a tidy business, but that is what your poem implies. ...

*Tear* This is a very powerful poem. I am like Mr.Knightley, I wish you had expanded a little bit more. Why is the Mom leaving? How old is the little ...

While I do think you did a good job with this poem, I wanted to know more about Serena and less about what she did. I don't know why, but ...

Wow, I really liked this poem. It was very well-written and I enjoyed the story in the poem. Was it intentional for you not to capitalise letters? I'm not sure ...